The attached document is a lab write up I had to do for Biology Lab 105. I had struggled writing this paper, because I was unsure how to explain myself without sounding like I’m writing a list.
Weakness: My grammar in this paper could have been improved, as could my word usage. The write up looks a bit rushed, particularly in the results section. I did not know how to explain the results, so this could have been the reason for my error.
Strengths: The method section was strong. I managed to write that section without it sounding like a list. The instructions I provided were clear, precise, with little sentence structure
